This week THE SECRET KEEPER has given us five words to launch our poetry from. Those words are: | GHOST| ROUGH | DUST | STRANGE | TURN |.
I have chosen to use the “28”form for this work .
Turn
by JE Lillie
Rough ghosts of the past silence
Voices that would draw me on.
Strange that I should listen to
Dust rather than turn and change.
Lillie-Put 
Change is more difficult than listening to the voices of the part. Your poem is well executed. Inspired with insight worth taking in and pondering. Your use of the 5 words were spot on. Your image drew me into it. A very enticing piece. The connection between poem and visual have been joined. I love your use of the’28’ form. It guides you through it. I have only tried the 4 line with 7 syllables. Next is to challenge the 7 lines with 4 syllables. A thanks Jael Aster for creating the ’28’ form. Hope to see you again. Great work on this group of words. Next time, I wonder just what they will be. – jk
It has been a while since I’ve written poetry. I am enjoying the challenge and shaking off the dust a bit.
Good. It is Such Fun!:)
Your poem is very good. I used the ’28’ also but am not entirely happy with it’s flow. Yours is really inspiring!
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