Here we are again for another episode of Friday Fictioneers with Rochelle. Check out the rules and read almost 100 other authors at this writers forum: http://rochellewisofffields.wordpress.com/2013/07/31/2-august-2013/
Here is this week’s story prompt.
Bee A Man
Mom built the hive with money from the divorce settlement. Always a back to nature girl, she went positively granola after dad took up with the surgically enhanced Barbie doll who answered his office phone. A little reactionary if you ask me but who can judge?
I can that’s who! You try being the kid who lives in a giant plastic beehive.
When the football team stuffed me through the eye hole of our giant bee lawn ornament I decided I’d had enough. They don’t zone for bee hives in Florida, but they have great beaches.
Lillie-Put 
It was time to get outta there. There’s a great rhythm to this piece. It flows beautifully.
Thanks so much Patrick! I am so glad you stopped by to read.
I love the line “surgically enhanced Barbie Doll,” although I have to wonder what those enhancement were. Sounds like the kid had it pretty rough.
Indeed he did have it rough. Thanks for stopping by.
There’s nothing wrong with a change of environment.
I suppose not under the circumstances it may have been his best option. Hey thanks for stopping by.
Very inventive take on the photo prompt. Well done!
Thanks Jan! I am glad you could stop by.
That’s hilarious!
Thanks Ben and thanks for using my photo on your blog. I am honored.
I agree with Ben–“Hilarious!!” I love “she went positively granola” and the Barbie Doll (good grief and a half).
Thank you so much. High praise indeed coming from a wordsmith of your caliber!
Positively granola = best line, lol
Thanks Dawn.
Thanks, for the laugh!
My pleasure.
Dear Joe,
I loved “went positively granola”. Florida does have some great beaches. Nice place to swim.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Yes it is. I particularly like the west coast beaches. Thanks for the opportunity you provide to create!
Interesting metaphor but I’m not sure I get the football team reference? Hope she escapes the beehive in Florida!
Hmm. I think I must have been a little muddy in my presentation. Thank you for stopping by.
I loved the positively granola too, classic 🙂
Thank you Helen!
Had she been eating the honey coated granola? A real honey of a story, sweet and funny! Ron
Thanks Ron! I am glad you could stop by!
All the experts will tell you just to stand up against the tyranny, but sometimes the best choice is to turn away.
Sometimes it seems like the only option. Hey thanks for stopping by.
Went positively granola–love that!
Thanks Patti!
I join the throngs who like “positively granola” and the angst buried in this tale of teenage rebellion. Great take on the picture. Sorry I’m late, still getting through last week’s stories, I’m glad I made it to yours
Thank you so much for reading. I hope I have not peaked with this statement. It is only week two for me. I would hate to be a wash out at two weeks old!