THE SECRET KEEPER has launched prompt #21. Click the underlined link to find all the poetry and stories associated with this week’s prompt.
The Challenge Words are:
| SILENCE | EYES| HEART | DRUM | LIFE |
Soul Warning
by JE Lillie
Hidden drumbeats
In silence speak.
The heart sees that
Which eyes cannot.
My soul warns me,
“Save your life man!”
I never learn.
’28’ Form poetry
Lillie-Put 
That speaks volumes and I love the photo you paired with it!
Thanks Deb. It is true that often we neglect to listen to the still small voice that would lead us out of trouble.
Oops! The man in your poem never learns. I believe the Soul is forgiving. More chances will come ahead depending how you interpret this poem. If is a really good use of the ’28’ form. I like using this form. Well done. Look forward to more. – jk
Thank you. Unteachability is a dangerous weakness. It keeps us from using our second chances properly.
Too true for too many too often.